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Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Haiku & Eastern


when you take bites out
of the sun smile wide so that
the light can shine through.
©2009 ~hyperactivatedx
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things are shaping up to be pretty odd
little deaths in musical beds
so it seems i'm someone i've never met~:music:
© Panic! At The Disco



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=iBop Nov 10, 2009, 2:18:37 PM
It's odd i see this in both a happy and sad light.
Happy for the obvious reasons of smiling and sun, but sad in the way of the sun burning and smiling with effort to try and let the sun shine through desperately.

Woah random tangent much?

Sorry about that XD
anyway I think it's such a nice little haiku <33
fabby work paige C:
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~hyperactivatedx Nov 10, 2009, 2:38:50 PM
nah i like the random tangent...i'd never realised that ;P

thank you ever so much my love...and for faving <33
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~Jess-Z Nov 11, 2009, 12:13:47 PM
aww, I find this very adorable
not sure if it should, but it gives me an image of a gaptoothchild with a sun in their mouth C:


/ifailatcommentsLIFE.

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~ thats what they all say... ♫
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~hyperactivatedx Nov 11, 2009, 12:56:57 PM
aww that's so cuuute :3 :3 :3

you dont fail so ssh, your comment made me smile :D shame there's no sun in my mouth.

thanks jess <3 <3
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~Lilasaur Nov 11, 2009, 1:09:37 PM
Ooh I adore this little haiku, how unique it sounds with the bites out of the sun bit :heart:

I love the images that come with the sun, and that it almost sounds as if your giving advice to a sad person (:

naaaice work mon copine :D
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~hyperactivatedx Nov 11, 2009, 2:26:08 PM
thaaaaaaaaaaank you <3 <3
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~Lilasaur Nov 12, 2009, 1:58:43 PM
You're welcomeeee <3333
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